Monday, January 18, 2010

The train station

My tryst with fiction continues.

Renuka looked around. No, Neel was not to be seen. The train had started leaving the station. It was now or never. If she had to ever leave this place, it had to be now. But how could she leave without Neel? How could she live without Neel. He was her knight in shinning armour. Her very own boy toy. A smile crept on her face as she remembered something about the boy toy.

But where was he? They were supposed to meet at the railway station half an hour ago. How can he be so careless?

Oh, the train is picking up speed. Should I stay onboard and wait for him to come to Delhi, or disembark here itself and wait for him to get to the station? I - I am eloping because I want to be with him. Whats the point of going alone. I would rather stay here.

As she set down her luggage, all of one college bag and an airbag, she was wondering - what could have kept Neel from coming down to the station. Had he got caught? But in that case She would have been hunted down too. So atleast he has not been caught. Thats a positive. Or is it? Because it means that worse things could be true.

To take her my off the other (seemingly worse) possibilities, Renuka turned her attention towards other people waiting at the station. A playful five year girl was running all over the place. Her parents would calm her and force her to sit down every few minutes. In response she would flee to places that would be difficult to spot. Amused at this game for sometime, Renuka drew an immediate parallel with her own life. Though she was not fleeing in a childish reaction - Or was she? A lot of her actions now seemed to be more reactionary than otherwise. Like the time she bought a scooty pep even though she did not like it very much. Or when she increased the intensity of her "friendship" with Neel after her father reminded her that she was only 16. Oh, My God! Would I have loved Neel the way I do if it were not for father's opposition?

Just then a local train stopped at the station. hoards of school and college students got down. There were samples of every type of student in the motley group. From the "serious" students who seem focused and took long swift strides as if to reduce time wastage, to the carefree group who cared more about chatting than anything else. Then there were couples who seemed oblivious to the world around them. Renuka evaluated herself against the people rushing past her.

I am definitely prettier than her. Look at the handsome guy she is with. Dont know what he sees in her.

Her earrings are so cute. Wonder where she got them from. Maybe it is from the new shop on Valabh Road. If I stay here, the first thing that I will do is check that shop out. Hold it, why am I thinking of staying here? I was supposed to have fled from this place an hour ago. Cant fathom what happened to Neel. What could have..

Hey, that girl is wearing the same shoes as mine. Bet she has a good taste. Somehow she looks nerdy, very career focused and all.

These focused people would probably have a good career. Hold it, I can focus hard - Why am I not thinking about my career? I have decent score in my 12th boards. Its been about an year into economics college - and granted that I havent done all too well till now, but that does not mean I cant make up for it. I heard there are good jobs for an economics graduate in Delhi. Hey, Sheela is in Delhi, doing economics - I should call her and ask ... I can actually ask her for colleges and admissions too actually. I can continue/ start over my studies, once in Delhi.

Why would I be in Delhi? Oh, Neel ! That stupid guy. I bet he did not have the guts to elope. He just wasn't man enough. Man! Dad. He has always been such an image of strength. But we havent talked for a long time - dont know what happened... Maybe I should call him.

Hey Dad, how are you?
- Hi, Beta, everything ok?
Haan papa, everything is fine. Just that we havent talked in some while now, so I thought that maybe we can talk.
- Sure Beta, tell me whats going on?
Papa, I want to BE someone. I want to build and live an independent life, have my own world.
- Great, My beta is growing up ! great! Beta, we are always there for you. We always wanted you make your own choices. Just that as a parent, we are a bit worried for you. So that you dont make wrong choices.
(Long Pause) Can you come and get me at Railway station, platform number 5? I have thoughts about moving to Delhi. There are better colleges and job opportunities there. I would like to discuss it in detail with you and mummy.
- (slightly startled) Yes beta, I am coming over. Just wait for me.

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10 comments:

Shlok Hariramani said...

Interesting piece of work. Good observation on how dames think. But hey! wat happned to neel.

hello...guys said...

nice work dear..

Ankit Ashok said...

@Shlok : Thanks man. I tried my best to put myself into a girl's shoe.

Neel did not show up. So we can either assume that he was a deserter, or he might have been caught up in some terrible way so that he could not make it.

Only time will tell if Neel decides to come out with his side of the story.

Ankit Ashok said...

@Hello Guys : Thanks.

TooL said...

"I bet he did not have the guts to elope. He just wasn't man enough. Man! Dad."--- made me hit the funny button right away..looking forward to your third stint..

Ankit Ashok said...

@Tool : We have very similar taste in humor.

And hopefully you will be obliged soon.

Sonia said...

Well tried......the girls thought process was an amazing obseration.

Ankit Ashok said...

@Sonia : Thanks. Especially because you like the chain of thoughts. when a girl likes the described chain, it must have come out ok.

And will try to get better than well tried next time.

gitanjali.j said...

Erm, hi..the first few opening lines, in some way, reminded me of the Aish Rai-running-away-scene from Guru!But yeah, the thought flow was good, man!If you are a girl,it only takes a guy to make you, or break you (we usually read it the other way, right?)Liked the scooty pep reference, validates the spur-of-the-moment decision!cheers!

Ankit Ashok said...

@Gitanjali : Thanks and welcome to the blog.

And yes, bollywood is a constant source of inspiration for us, isn't it?

And special thanks for noticing the scooty-pep reference - no one else seems to have noticed it :(